Way-back Wednesday 8/9/17: …a grandmother the morning after… #haibun #haiku #poetry

The Morning After

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Her cup of Columbian Supremo cools atop of a crumpled copy of the Journal News, spread over the kitchen table like leaves across the lawn. She stands by the kitchen sink, inhales another drag on a half-smoked Marlboro, stares out the window, not seeing the cracked blacktop or the rust on the basketball hoop.

There’s no sign of yesterday’s overcooked prime ribs. No trace of aroma from the baked yams or steamed avocados. No echo of the scream, the slap.

The silence.

Just her, another grandma. With a swollen right cheek.

 

Stained window

Breeze scattering leaves up

Any Maple Street

 

 

Previously published in Image Curve, August 1, 2014

 

Photograph from unsplash.com

 

UPDATE: for dVerse Poets Pub–MTB–January 4, 2018

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26 responses to “Way-back Wednesday 8/9/17: …a grandmother the morning after… #haibun #haiku #poetry”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Loved that you included a reading.. your pauses works so well to express that gritty scene of an old woman subject to abuse… who is the one hitting, the grand pa, a son or grandson.. so many possibilities to find.. well done.

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  2. jillys2016 Avatar

    Oh, this comes alive with the audio! So much power in the words and in the silences.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jilly! 🙂

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  3. kim881 Avatar

    I like the use of alliteration in ‘Her cup of Columbian Supremo cools atop of a crumpled copy of the Journal News, spread over the kitchen table like leaves across the lawn’,gentle sound effects that lead up to: ‘No echo of the scream, the slap. The silence’ and amplify the shock. Nicely done, Frank!

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  4. Charley Avatar

    Oh my gosh, ouch! That packed a punch (pardon the pun). The silences add to the drama.

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  5. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    That was fantastic Frank, and the recording as well!

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  6. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice audio version!

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  7. dianadevlinblog Avatar

    Super poem, enhanced by the audio!

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  8. kanzensakura Avatar

    I refuse to have sound on my computer. I enjoy reading in silence. In silence, this was devastating. Well done.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Toni! 😀

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  9. rothpoetry Avatar

    Heavy Frank! Your breaks are great….create a flow that carries on to the end. Abuse is such a difficult thing…ending in screams or in silence as you shared here! Great poem!
    Dwight

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  10. rosross Avatar

    So much said with so few words and great to have a reading. I need to find out how to do that.

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  11. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    This entire poem is about silence. The abused suffer in silence, and no one is ever listening. Very moving poem, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jane! Unfortunately, abuse thrives in silence.

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        And that’s how the evil f***kers get away with it.

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  12. alisonhankinson Avatar

    This was so real. It haunts me. Much love to all out there who suffer or have suffered in silence.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. Thanks, Alison!

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  13. jazzytower Avatar

    A powerful one, Frank. The moments of silence speak for themself. It also came across really well in the audio version. And that photo is spot on, Nice job!!

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  14. September Morning: A #Haibun for #LaborDay – Frank J. Tassone Avatar

    […] for dVerse Haibun Monday: Good Morning! (pubtended by Mish). My thanks to Mish for featuring my haibun “The Morning After.” […]

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