#Throwdown Thursday 11/8/17…my latest is up: Meltdown – #Haibun #poetry .@ImageCurve

Meltdown

 

 

I’m administering a Level I Vocational Assessment to Ana, when Julian bursts into the room,

He throws something that misses Myru and hits the metal cabinet housing our class’ books and folders. He drops into a worn desk. His fists repeatedly pound the surface, before opening and clasping the back of his head.

Then he howls.

I rush to his side and take a knee. Coax him to breathe. Victor A.–our AP of security–appears just behind him and asks if he’s all right.

I get Julian up and outside. “We’re good,” I reply to Victor.

We walk a lap around the school, and Julian explains his outburst. He’s failing Algebra. He’s terrified of what his mom will say.

He can’t stand it, but he won’t let it go.

 

afternoon sunlight

in his counselor’s office

rapid eye movement

 

 

Photo by Cel Lisboa on Unsplash

first published in Image Curve, November 9, 2017

 

Update! for dVerse Poets’ Haibun Monday–Compassion, guest-pubtended by Xenia Trans

With Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform~ Running On… , imagined by Pat

 

 

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8 responses to “#Throwdown Thursday 11/8/17…my latest is up: Meltdown – #Haibun #poetry .@ImageCurve”

  1. whippetwisdom Avatar

    Poor Julian! A very moving haibun Frank and I love the warmth in the closing haiku 🌞

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  2. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I can imagine being in his position. Hopefully I wouldn’t throw anything.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      LOL! Thanks, Frank! 🙂

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  3. willow88switches Avatar
    willow88switches

    I really was moved by the Haiku Frank, which says alot – I’m not a big fan of most Haiku – but the Haibun is a great story/intro to the ending – and I was really surprisingly pleased with the line “rapid eye movement” – it was wholly unexpected yet it follows so well with the 2 other lines …. elegant and graceful, with just enough of a mysterious touch – referring to dream state and the blinking – whether of the tears being shed, or perhaps a sudden realization of the surrealism of a moment – as inferred by “afternoon sunlight” …. yes, this is really lovely.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Willow! I appreciate this! 🙂

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      1. willow88switches Avatar
        willow88switches

        my pleasure!

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  4. MarinaSofia Avatar

    Awww, so true, we rush to judge, but it is so hard to be an adolescent and learn to deal with all these pressures.

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