#Senryu Saturday 11/11/17…a #haibun on a birthday going wrong…#haiku #poetry

Uninvited Celebrants


We had plans for my birthday worked out when the French door opens. Five minutes later Mom and Dad sit at our kitchen table. As often happens living in a mother-daughter home.

“We didn’t know what you guys were doing,” Dad says, “We bought a cheesecake.”

“We celebrated last night,” I reply.

“That was for Robert, since he was home,” Mom answers.

“What about the Realtor’s party?”

The one they were supposed to make without us.

Mira wipes the counter. Showing only her stiff back and cringing shoulders. Frankie pulls a kitchen chair to the sink and opens the faucet.

“Wash your hands in the bathroom,” she shouts.

He continues to run the water. “Do what she says!” I snap.

He jumps down from the chair, runs into the bathroom and slams the door. I sigh and shut the faucet.

Dad and Mom get up. “We’ll go to the Realtor’s party,” she says, “you’ve got your hands full.”

Veteran’s Day

Puzzled parents carry an

unlit Birthday cake

first published in Image Curve, November 12, 2014

Photograph by Ryan McGuire

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3 responses to “#Senryu Saturday 11/11/17…a #haibun on a birthday going wrong…#haiku #poetry”

  1. Sherry Marr Avatar

    I can see this scene so clearly………sometimes a helpful gesture is made at the wrong time………smiles.

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  2. mhmp77 Avatar
    mhmp77

    kaykuala

    Puzzled parents carry an
    unlit Birthday cake

    One way to resolve an issue is to bring it to a neutral venue.

    Hank

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